Chapter 13, page 15

May 26th, 2017, 2:00 am

User Comments:

Guesticus (Guest), May 26th, 2017, 6:22 am     Reply


Wow! Mirror looks so sad in panel three, when she recalled losing 'contact' with Abby ('anymore' should be two words by the way, it's like the difference between 'may be' and 'maybe')

Something is telling me, Abby's rejection of Mr. Talpha will directly or indirectly lead to her coming under the attention of the Slorn, but what ever it is, it won't be pleasant for her

Merceneiress, May 26th, 2017, 8:08 am     Reply


@Guesticus: Yes, you are right -- thank you, will correct.

agedsage (Guest), May 27th, 2017, 7:43 am     Reply


Can the "Grammar Police" take a day off.Keep your corrections in your head,like the rest of the world or sign-on as Official Proof-Reader. *JMPP*

Merceneiress, May 27th, 2017, 9:01 am     Reply


@agedsage: I don't mind. I need someone to keep my grammar in check!

Dean (Guest), May 28th, 2017, 9:54 pm     Reply


Luckily for Mr Talpha, many people have gone on to live full and happy lives without their multi-appendix.

guest1 (Guest), May 29th, 2017, 10:33 am     Reply


@Dean: ?? are you being obvious, or are you being sassy??? cuz people can have more than one appendix.,, its rare but real.. i had 3 removed at once..