Chapter 14, page 22

March 15th, 2018, 11:00 pm

User Comments:

Lurker314 (Guest), March 16th, 2018, 1:39 am     Reply

One way to make sure the path is different... More to the point, there appears very much to be an unspoken understanding that she is speaking with her tutor.

Nice way to keep tabs on the queen & keep the queen busy with new responsibilities. And perhaps distract her from the fact that mirror has suddenly gone away.

If I'm right, Little Tir' is playing WAY over her level, though....

Hank (Guest), March 16th, 2018, 7:57 am     Reply

Tirin: I am not afraid.
Queen: You will be. You will be...

Where I have heard this before?

Lloyd (Guest), March 16th, 2018, 8:06 am     Reply

! Awesome plot twist !
Good on Tirin for recognizing that improved abilities are much more important than material gifts.
I was wondering where the story might go with the main antagonist dead and only the mopping up left to do.
As always, thanks for the story and artwork. (I vote on twc every day.)

Quarktime (Guest), March 16th, 2018, 9:11 am     Reply

I met him in a swamp down in Dagoba
Where it bubbles all the time like a giant carbonated soda
S-O-D-A, soda

I saw the little runt sitting there on a log
I asked him his name and in a raspy voice he said "yoda"
Y-O-D-A, Yoda
Yo-yo-yo-yo Yoda

Ganurath (Guest), March 16th, 2018, 7:20 pm     Reply

@Hank: Episode V, Luke and Yoda.

Dragonrider, March 17th, 2018, 12:47 am     Reply

@Lurker314: No not over her level
just stretching her wings. Who decided she has no innate magic ability? Sneaking feeling she has and has included Queenie in her better dead list.

Guesticus (Guest), March 17th, 2018, 4:45 am     Reply

@Everyone: Bitchlock is not the Queen in this Time Line; the former Queen and Princess were soul toasted in Grownup Tirin's Time Line in an attempt by Flin to set up Tirin

Guesticus (Guest), March 17th, 2018, 6:40 am     Reply

Just want to say, how great it is to see Dabs so happy, just hope she remains so when she sees her house :P
Jerety probably thought she was never coming back so either trashed it, or sold it :P

Oh and Bitchie-Poo? Everyone is afraid at times, including you, it is how one deals with the fear that matters, and that is where Lil Tir will surprise you all

Merceneiress, March 17th, 2018, 4:54 pm     Reply

@Lurker314: Mistress is not the Queen, but for all practical purposes she pretty much is (like a Prime Minister)

@Hank: Haha, one of my favorite movies of all time...

@Lloyd: Thank you so much for your compliments and for voting!!! Glad you like the new direction the story will be going.

@Quarktime: Weird Al is the GREATEST!

@Dragonrider: You mean Salockie (but Queenie could also be on the list too)

@Guesticus: Jerety is Dabney's slave (you wouldn't have known that at this point in the story, just figured I'd clarify) --- can't sell her home, but trashing it is a definite possibility (to the consternation of Dabney)

Guesticus (Guest), March 18th, 2018, 1:10 am     Reply

@Merceneiress: what happens to a slave when their owner is killed?
Just asking on behalf of someone who wants to remain anonymous >_>

Wait, a slave can own a slave? o_O

Ganurath (Guest), March 18th, 2018, 3:25 am     Reply

@Guesticus: I don't think Dabney has enough male genitalia to be a slave of the Vay.

Guesticus (Guest), March 18th, 2018, 7:50 am     Reply

@Ganurath: you believe Dabs volunteered to be part of the Trial? Basically an indefinite duty? She was there until she managed to beat 12 Trialists, and they only had one Trial every year or so, just be glad it wasn't 12 consecutive wins!!

Merceneiress, March 18th, 2018, 9:47 am     Reply

@Guesticus: Every Vay owns a slave --- when a Vay is serving time, their slave continues to maintain their master's home, but also help serve other masters (until their master is released). If a Vay dies, the slave is put on the auction block. If the Vay's slave dies, then she can go to the auction block to buy another one.

Guesticus (Guest), March 18th, 2018, 2:29 pm     Reply

@Merceneiress: thank you for explaining :D

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