Chapter 11, Page 22

21 Nov 2015 10:11 am

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User Comments:

Guesticus (Guest), 21 Nov 2015 01:13 pm     Reply

Miss Rorry seems nice

Jamie59, 21 Nov 2015 05:11 pm     Reply

Billy's elf is a little bloodthirsty there.

Dragonrider, 21 Nov 2015 05:26 pm     Reply

Tirin consult your "other self" you NEVER pass the opportunity for food or sleep, you don't know when it will happen again.

Side note looks like Billy wants to play hero for Tirin. Might it be Billy is not quite as nice and innocent as her other self remembers?

unicornfrog, 21 Nov 2015 07:41 pm     Reply

Oh goodie!! ;)

I think Billy is actually a badass at heart. And if the elf knows everything Billy does, that means she knows we are in for a good time!
I'm getting a larger "heart bubble" for this story every chapter ^___^

ByronG (Guest), 23 Nov 2015 07:50 am     Reply

Maybe a lot later
Well Mom, depending on the trouble we get into, we may be home A LOT later!

Karyl (Guest), 23 Nov 2015 08:39 am     Reply

You do such good work with characters and textures, and all the myriad details of scenes. Thank you so much for returning to this story!

Merceneiress, 23 Nov 2015 07:44 pm     Reply

@Guesticus: She is isn't she.

@Jamie59: Indeed - more of a shoulder devil than angel.

@Dragonrider: It's a pivotal time for Billy (especially with puberty hitting).

@unicornfrog: Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Yes, the elf is perhaps an unconscious reflection of Billy's true feelings.

@ByronG: Yeah, just keep the pot roast warm, Mom, in case I'm running late.

@Karyl: Thank you so much! Glad you are enjoying it. So far I'm having a blast.

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