so managed to read everything in one day and the art has got a lot better but still seems a little inconsistant at times (especialy with fine details and proportions) but the story has become far more involved which is a nice change, i do find the nonsencical jargon to be a bit excesive at times but overall a remarkable amount of growth in writing skill and an overall good read so far.
Thank you so much!! Yes, there is a lot of nonsensical jargon isn’t there — will work on that — appreciate you reading/commenting and glad you liked it overall! (glad the shit smell went a way a little)
7 thoughts on “Chapter 23, page 2 – The Wendy Mission”
Guesticules
Yeah, BIG ‘uh-oh’: Wendy has hooked up with Billy Ray Cyrus 😛
Merceneiress
😂 we will indeed be dealing with an achy breaky heart in the near future…
Guesticules
Wondering if there is a reason why ‘esque and ‘isho look identical, including the haircut, eye colour is the only real difference
Guesticules
Really liking D4 Reny’s outfit
Merceneiress
👍👍👍
Maverag
so managed to read everything in one day and the art has got a lot better but still seems a little inconsistant at times (especialy with fine details and proportions) but the story has become far more involved which is a nice change, i do find the nonsencical jargon to be a bit excesive at times but overall a remarkable amount of growth in writing skill and an overall good read so far.
Merceneiress
Thank you so much!! Yes, there is a lot of nonsensical jargon isn’t there — will work on that — appreciate you reading/commenting and glad you liked it overall! (glad the shit smell went a way a little)