Chapter 21, page 25 – I’ll be back

Reny wakes and Trina goes off to fetch Billy, which is documented in "Reparations" ($10 Patreon tier)

22 thoughts on “Chapter 21, page 25 – I’ll be back

  1. Somehow, you made the cute ASS even more adorable πŸ˜€

    1. thinking about an ASS spinoff…πŸ˜‹

      1. Spin that ASS πŸ˜‰

  2. How do they know the Torgi is still in Tirinite custody? We know he has corrupted at least one of the Tirinite’s…

  3. Seriously?

    Damaged robot that looks human and says, “I’ll be back”?

    I almost shot coffee out my nose reading it, because you KNOW the voice I heard. πŸ™‚

    1. πŸ˜‚ very happy you got that!

    2. With the Austrian accent? πŸ™‚

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          “Come with me if you want to come.”
          Trina proves she is not a robot every time she speaks in Captcha font.

        2. 😁

      2. Nah, Australian πŸ˜›

  4. From left field: Tirin’s T-frock brings to mind Baubo, the belly goddess, but squoze through a comic distortion field….

    1. 😁perfect description!

  5. I know one thing. After being ignored, to the point she doesn’t even consider that Billy might be cursed, much less try to cure him. And all the other bullshit she dumped on him, if I was Billy I’d never have anything to do with her again.

    Just like I don’t my ex. When someone you consider your soulmate lodges a 10 foot knife in your back, and discards you like trash, that…goes away. Real real far away.

    If I saw my ex rolling around the ground on fire, I wouldn’t cross the street to piss on her. Much less hang out.

    1. Excellent point – Tirin definitely failed to consider the possibility that Billy was cursed and blew him off, especially after he sought Trina’s solace. So how will Billy react once the curse is removed? I’ve been thinking of releasing a safer version of the Patreon story “Reparations” for the public (possibly as the next chapeter?) so you can find out. If there is enough interest in Billy and Trina’s story, maybe I will…

      1. I’m more interested in Trina than Billy. Especially after he abandoned her in the street fight.
        She’s only with him because he programmed her to be. That would be interesting to watch change during her wakening.
        Eric Hines

        1. Same, Billy, to me, has always seemed a whiney needy brat, getting older (and favoured status) hasn’t really changed much
          So, have Trina ditch him and join the Tirinites would be good (just a suggestion, not a demand)

  6. Do we want to know how Tamara has her green ribbon attached? o_O

  7. Would love to see the Reparations chapter. I started from the beginning several weeks ago and have been binge-reading since then. Finally caught up. I am amazed by the story lines, intricate and yet can be followed easily. The artwork is stunning.

    1. Thank you so much! I think I am going to put Reparations up as the next chapter… thanks again for reading and glad you liked it!

  8. I love the way the Tirinites dress. The one talking to Trina is Gorgeous! Tirin’s shirt, with the face and the tongue right over her crotch? Double entendre anyone? As far as Billy goes, he needs to pull his head out of his ass! He should have taken SOME kind of self defense training by now. Being an artificial construct, I suppose that Trina could qualify as a body guard, but that is no substitute for being able to defend yourself. He is, afterall, a very High Ranking member of the government. He will probably have to make a decision in the future, if he wants to have a relationship with Tirin, now that she is free of Salock’s curse. I doubt that Tirin will permit him to have a concubine, (Trina), if he wants to be with her. I don’t know what will be “safer” about the Reparations storyline, but I look forward to reading it. It seems both Billy, and Trina will be experiencing some profound changes.

    1. Safer meaning not as explicit as in Patreon version…

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