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Chapter 17, page 15 – Billy and Tirin interlude


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Chapter 17, page 15 – Billy and Tirin interlude

by merceneiress on April 23, 2020 at 9:00 pm
Chapter: Chapter 17: Death by Cliff(erow)
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  1. ems
    April 23, 2020, 11:33 pm | # | Reply

    Good work! That kiss was long overdue and now, right before the action, is the perfect time. ( Note there is a typo in the first line of Lil Tirin.)

    • merceneiress
      April 24, 2020, 6:41 am | # | Reply

      Gaah! Once again the typo demons have struck! Corrected! Thank you!

  2. Neil
    April 24, 2020, 12:36 am | # | Reply

    Steve,

    Every so often, throughout this marvelously long tale, you lean into the unspoken elements of the scene. They’re like mini-arcs lasting only a page. In this one you’ve taken us all back to those awkward, memorable, angst-filled moments we all had in tender youth. This is difficult to do in a blocky, 10-year old medium.

    But confusion in Billy and the coy face of Tirin during this exchange evince whimsical, smile-filled reminiscence in even crusty old bastards like me. We’re not Reading the page — we’re In the page.
    Kudos, my friend.

    *(Change ‘it’s’ to ‘it’ in the second line, first panel.)

    Neil

    • merceneiress
      April 24, 2020, 6:44 am | # | Reply

      Thank you so much Neil. I am so glad the page conveyed that (this bastard remembers those youthful days too and really wanted the page to convey everything you described). I have corrected the first panel (dang typos!)

  3. Guesticus
    April 24, 2020, 12:56 am | # | Reply

    So, when are they going to introduce each other to their head-guest? πŸ˜€
    Or is that a ‘third date’ thing?

    • merceneiress
      April 24, 2020, 6:45 am | # | Reply

      Haha, yes, only on the third date…

  4. Lloyd
    April 24, 2020, 4:36 pm | # | Reply

    I cannot think of enough superlatives for this page! Thank you!

    • merceneiress
      April 24, 2020, 6:18 pm | # | Reply

      Thank you! πŸ™‚

  5. StarSword
    April 26, 2020, 6:44 pm | # | Reply

    D’AAAAAAAWWWWWWW…

    • merceneiress
      April 29, 2020, 5:45 pm | # | Reply

      πŸ˜‚

  6. Jennifer
    April 30, 2020, 5:19 pm | # | Reply

    SQUEEEE <3

    • merceneiress
      April 30, 2020, 7:32 pm | # | Reply

      πŸ™‚

  7. T.J.
    April 30, 2020, 7:28 pm | # | Reply

    oh, to be young again…

    you really conveyed the awkwardness well, and the facial expressions were charming.

    • merceneiress
      April 30, 2020, 7:31 pm | # | Reply

      Thank you so much! πŸ™

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