Chapter 2, page 11 – mission parameter: use your dad’s secret weapon by merceneiress on December 4, 2019 at 12:51 pm Chapter: Chapter 2: To Toast a Soul
Spit-takes as comedy works better if the audience is in on the joke, but whatever…
Here the spit-take is used as an exaggerated reaction to something very shocking to Tirin, not as a comedy bit, hopefully spurring the reader to read on and find out why.