Spit-takes as comedy works better if the audience is in on the joke, but whatever…
Here the spit-take is used as an exaggerated reaction to something very shocking to Tirin, not as a comedy bit, hopefully spurring the reader to read on and find out why.
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2 thoughts on “Chapter 2, page 11 – mission parameter: use your dad’s secret weapon”
Hinoron
Spit-takes as comedy works better if the audience is in on the joke, but whatever…
merceneiress
Here the spit-take is used as an exaggerated reaction to something very shocking to Tirin, not as a comedy bit, hopefully spurring the reader to read on and find out why.