Chapter 16, page 32

November 7th, 2019, 11:00 pm

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Dragonrider November 8th, 2019, 1:47 am
Looks like Bitchlok is about to feel the hand of fate, or possibly the sword. I feel she has not long to remain on this mortal realm. Somehow I feel Bitchlocks treatment of little Tirin will off set much of the wrath against Samson however he still may be banished.
Dragonrider November 8th, 2019, 7:54 am
@Dragonrider: BTW that's one hell of a set on Queenie, hoe about a vote incentive of her Sun Bathing ala Eve?
Brother Parvus November 8th, 2019, 11:32 am
Merceneiress November 9th, 2019, 12:41 am
@Dragonrider: haha -- hmm..will think about that vote incentive idea...
robnot (Guest) November 8th, 2019, 8:16 am
@Dragonrider: banishment , no . she has the golden goose.. so no banishment.. i wood say restructure of the gilded cage.. IE: restrict where he can go, (for a while),, armed guards ALL the time now..
E Hines (Guest) November 8th, 2019, 9:29 am
@Dragonrider: Or maybe Salock will get the Fickle Finger of Fate Award, which she can display in her new abode, taking Dabney's erstwhile place on the other side of a particular mirror.
As for Samson and Yritai, we don't want to waste Yritai, do we?
Eric Hines
Dragonrider November 8th, 2019, 2:53 pm
@E Hines: Really don't think Queenie is the type to leave an enemy a potential avenue to throw a wrench in the works.No, feel she's the pragmatic type,"Off With Her Head".
Guesticus (Guest) November 8th, 2019, 11:39 pm
@E Hines: it was Abby who was on the other side of the mirror, Dabs was one of the Three Challenges based on her unique ability

Queenie has read the works of the Great Shaka, namely (paraphrased because saw the mini-series a long long time ago)- "Kill the dog that is cowering at your feet, least they return as a jackal and leap for your throat!"
Personally have never signed up with the 'better the devil you know' crap, that is simply terrible writing
E Hines (Guest) November 9th, 2019, 9:25 am
@Guesticus: Yeah, that's the side of the mirror I was talking about. Not the in side.
Eric Hines
Guesticus (Guest) November 8th, 2019, 11:53 pm
@Dragonrider: the fact he hadn't actually interfered in the Trial might go some way in his favour, specially after Bitclock's actions
Lloyd (Guest) November 8th, 2019, 6:52 pm
last panel: perhaps "you know better _than_ to speak out of turn"?

As always, enjoying the story and vote every day. Thank you.
Guesticus (Guest) November 8th, 2019, 11:47 pm
@Lloyd: maybe, or even "you know better to not speak out of turn"
Personally, the way it is is fine
Merceneiress November 9th, 2019, 12:38 am
@Lloyd: Hmm. I think you're right.
Guesticus (Guest) November 8th, 2019, 11:49 pm
Two things: loving Mirby's smirk in panel "ACK!" :D

And, new patreon animated banner :)
Merceneiress November 9th, 2019, 12:38 am
@Guesticus: Glad you saw that!
Guesticus (Guest) November 9th, 2019, 11:19 am
@Merceneiress: saw it, and saved it :D
Oh, you meant Mirby's smirk
Guesticus (Guest) November 8th, 2019, 11:54 pm
Is no one else concerned about where Afro-dome is?
Dragonrider November 9th, 2019, 1:38 am
@Guesticus: More concerned with where the apprentice we haven't seen since the knock out scene with little Tirin has gone. What nefarious plot has Bitchlock sent her on, could she be bringing the Evil Emperor's troops to surprise attack and free Bitchlock?
robnot (Guest) November 9th, 2019, 7:05 am
@Dragonrider:im guessing the dark apprentice,,? acne is next to lil Tirin..
Guesticus (Guest) November 9th, 2019, 11:18 am
@robnot: yes, Zit-face is beside Lil Tir, Afro-dome is the one Dabs pretended to be, and hasn't been seen (for real) since Lil Tir was drugged
FilledWithLoveAndEvil (Guest) November 9th, 2019, 11:26 am
Why did the queen say clairvoyant instead of telepathic? Think she knows about the Time Spice? (Especially since Sariel spoke to Tirin about it BEFORE slowing time.) I guess being Clairvoyant Queensguard is Dabney's punishment, especially if she doesn't get to keep her orgy massages.

I wonder if the queen became suspicious at Little Tirin's miraculous recovery that nobody mentioned, and ran a super slow-mo instant replay.

"Referee, what was that conversation between Cultural Historian Cowgirl and that blonde stranger about Uon Spice? Archive to the top-secret servers then delete. And wipe the memories of those 2 guards, and your own."
Merceneiress November 10th, 2019, 12:15 pm
@FilledWithLoveAndEvil: hmm, very good points...
ManWithJoeName (Guest) November 12th, 2019, 7:03 pm
Definitely want to see more of the queen. Hopefully something on Patreon?
Merceneiress November 12th, 2019, 11:42 pm
@ManWithJoeName: Good idea. working on a vote incentive and then NSFW versions on Patreon, perhaps with a little story.
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