Chapter 16, page 6

May 9th, 2019, 11:00 pm

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Guesticus (Guest) May 10th, 2019, 5:51 am
Watch your back Lil Tir, Eritha has heard everything, and she still doesn't like you
E Hines (Guest) May 10th, 2019, 6:58 am
@Guesticus: Eritha can't see the Oscar toy clone. What she is seeing and hearing are the babblings and mewlings of a child, suddenly confronted with the monster that already has tried to kill her and her boyfriend, gibbering in fear.
Tirin the Younger can sell that. Can Eritha sell the contrary?
Still--T the Y should watch her back. And not pull any punches.
Eric Hines
Guesticus (Guest) May 10th, 2019, 9:12 am
@E Hines: yeah, she can't see or hear Oscar, butt she can hear what Lil Tir is saying, and, while she may not fully understand what she's babbling about, she still knows it's something she can use against her later
Lil Tir has nothing to fear from being confronted by Dabs, she already beat Dabs, remember? While Eritha may not know that, Bitchlock does
E Hines (Guest) May 10th, 2019, 9:34 am
@Guesticus: Dabney isn't Tirin the Younger's enemy, and she knows that. It's against Eritha that she needs some back-watching.
Dabney is just blowing smoke up Blalock's corset; T the Y understands that. So does Dinky Oscar. Or he will when he gets past his self-absorption.
Eric Hines
Guesticus (Guest) May 10th, 2019, 6:53 pm
@E Hines: so, which monster are you talking about? o_O
E Hines (Guest) May 10th, 2019, 7:02 pm
@Guesticus: I'm not talking about any monster. I'm talking about what Eritha thinks Tirin the Younger is gibbering from.
Eric Hines
Merceneiress May 11th, 2019, 12:29 am
@Guesticus: Just a little correction -- that's Grace looking at Tirin. The girl with the pimples is Eritha.
E Hines (Guest) May 11th, 2019, 9:13 am
@Merceneiress: So she is. Oh, well. All them bratty little hormonal adolescents look alike to me.
Eric Hines
Merceneiress May 11th, 2019, 9:39 am
@E Hines: haha!
Guesticus (Guest) May 11th, 2019, 12:40 pm
@Merceneiress: damnit! and was thinking me clever for remembering how to spell the name correctly :(
Lloyd (Guest) May 11th, 2019, 9:12 pm
The _author_ gets the editing award!
Guesticus (Guest) May 13th, 2019, 12:59 am
@Lloyd: nothing was edited here, it was simply me making the initial error with names and E Hines replying using the same, erroneous, name
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