Chapter 15, page 23 (Siresha's day off)

December 27th, 2018, 11:00 pm

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Guesticus (Guest) December 28th, 2018, 12:17 am
Is that mention of habanero a result of the comment about her being too hot to eat (out)? o_O
Or had you planned this for some weeks? :D
Merceneiress December 28th, 2018, 12:58 am
@Guesticus: This scene was planned, but the comments about her spiciness inspired the use of the Habanero. That's why I love reading everyone's comments!
Guesticus (Guest) December 28th, 2018, 2:37 am
@Merceneiress: and it's one of the reasons why you are one of the top creators: willing to adjust minor details based on comments :D
Merceneiress December 28th, 2018, 10:00 am
@Guesticus: You're too kind. Thank you!
E Hines (Guest) December 28th, 2018, 9:08 am
One more minor detail, regarding Siresha's exchange with Ephraim: it's the Goolarian that is the masochist. Siresha (and Vay women) are sadists.
That's what makes it so entertaining to...tame...them. Especially a spicy hot Siresha.
Eric Hines
Merceneiress December 28th, 2018, 9:59 am
@E Hines: You are absolutely right --- changed. Thank you!
Guesticus (Guest) January 1st, 2019, 12:16 am
Very nice new invotive :)
Merceneiress January 1st, 2019, 9:24 am
@Guesticus: Glad you liked it!
Guesticus (Guest) January 2nd, 2019, 10:22 am
@Merceneiress: not all invotives have to be 'sexy' to be good :D
Merceneiress January 2nd, 2019, 3:01 pm
@Guesticus: Glad you said that!
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