Chapter 15, page 17

November 15th, 2018, 11:22 pm

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Ganurath (Guest) November 15th, 2018, 11:48 pm
The image is broken for me.
Merceneiress November 15th, 2018, 11:55 pm
@Ganurath: Sorry! Should be working now.
Dragonrider November 16th, 2018, 12:26 am
somebody besides Abby wants a violent resolution, they should take this to null space, phase shift or what ever, keep the guards out of it.
Guseticus (Guest) November 16th, 2018, 1:14 am
Whatever you want to call Dabs, she did serve out her sentence, not snivel and whine and hide, denying everything (or worse, cause the utter defeat of the entire planet!!)

This? This is not making me not despise that bitch any less!
And her 'conditions' for the fight makes her sound like the whiners in DCUO who complain when someone uses a Soder to heal during a duel or scrimmage
Guesticus (Guest) November 16th, 2018, 1:20 am
As for the invotive: did Dabs' car break down? maybe run out of fuel (or whatever they use to power it)?
Whatever, they are gonna pay Mirby big time for getting her out of bed and only enough time to put on a small robe :D
Merceneiress November 16th, 2018, 8:29 pm
@Guesticus: I just added some narrative to flesh out the scene...
Guesticus (Guest) November 17th, 2018, 5:59 am
@Merceneiress: noticed that, couldn't remember seeing it first time and thought was going (more) nuts :/
E Hines (Guest) November 16th, 2018, 8:22 am
Felina's got a lot of talk and not much action when even a remotely even fight is in the offing. 'Course that's consistent with her sneaking around behind others' back to betray her planet for her personal gain.
Give her to me. I'll straighten her out.
For my...compensation...I claim Dabney.
Eric Hines
Guesticus (Guest) November 17th, 2018, 5:58 am
@E Hines: she even got her gut kicked by a little girl!!
E Hines (Guest) November 17th, 2018, 7:17 am
@Guesticus: Which Tirin the Elder recalls, which may be why no one is worried about li'l Dabney taking on trained Felina.
Eric Hines
Guesticus (Guest) November 18th, 2018, 8:10 am
@E Hines: just remember: Lil Tir was trained
Butt doubt Dabs would have been just sitting around for nearly twelve years doing her nails...
Guesticus (Guest) November 20th, 2018, 12:56 am
Just thought of something: Felony is bluffing! or lying, or whatever (which is ironic considering she accused Dabs of being a liar...)
She doesn't know that they know what she has done so is blustering as a distraction hoping that her loud (and annoying) voice will alert her guards and buy her time

Dabs may or may not be a liar and a thief, butt Felony is a liar and genocidal traitor bitch!! All because she's pissed that a man was given such a high-prestige job and she couldn't own the little spectacled brat
Merceneiress November 20th, 2018, 8:45 pm
@Guesticus: Felina is in defense mode --- not knowing exactly what is going on or who these people are --- confused and intrigued that these people are offering salvation especially after she was praying about it --- I think anger for her and some other people is an easier emotion to latch onto during such times --- so she is channeling her anger at Dabney --- the outcome of which may not be the best for poor Dabs.
robnot (Guest) November 22nd, 2018, 8:40 am
Happy Thanksgiving.!
Merceneiress November 22nd, 2018, 9:19 am
@robnot: Thank you! Happy Thanksgiving to you too!
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