Chapter 15 Page 1, Cover

July 26th, 2018, 11:00 pm

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Ganurath (Guest) July 26th, 2018, 11:06 pm
I anticipate a happy ending with a little death.
E Hines (Guest) July 27th, 2018, 6:14 am
@Ganurath: There are happy endings, and there are...happy endings.
One is in the offing, the other is in the off. Likely, Dear Leader is getting the one and not the other.
Eric Hines
Merceneiress July 30th, 2018, 1:44 am
@Ganurath, @E Hines, @SoftSpot: the kiss of death would probably be preferred by the emperor rather than the slice of maim. Will Tirin and company give him a choice?
E Hines (Guest) July 30th, 2018, 8:20 am
@Merceneiress: Sure. To find out what he least fears so they can not do that one.
Eric Hines
SoftSpot July 27th, 2018, 8:03 am
the kiss... of the killer women. He will be thrilled to death.
Dragonrider July 27th, 2018, 3:01 pm
A young Emperor with three "Eager" to experience his ""Majestical"" bedroom skills. This should be good. Just remember Tirin he already has had one penoctomy just pissed him off. Do it again leave it shoved down his lifeless throat, better yet make him disappear mysteriously.
Guesticus (Guest) July 28th, 2018, 1:24 am
This looks like an alternate Dimensional delusion: Mirby Prime doesn't have long hair
Merceneiress July 28th, 2018, 1:43 am
@Guesticus: She grows it back just for the Emperor (with a little help of magical hair tonic)
Continuity (Guest) July 28th, 2018, 3:12 am
Deja Vu, all over again So, in this timeline, the prince didn't run into the floozies that gave him so many nightmares. And yet, I'm catching a similar vibe, here...
Guesticus (Guest) July 28th, 2018, 4:56 pm
@Continuity: different 'floozies' (and will let PeeTee and Mirby deal with you about that name :P ), butt same result (or worse, seeing how PeeTee has more than one personal reason for vengeance)
Merceneiress July 30th, 2018, 1:37 am
@Continuity: yes you're right -- similar vibe. Will it result in similar outcome?
awhorl (Guest) July 30th, 2018, 10:31 am
@Continuity: Hey, if that's what the Emperor thinks they are, then they are in "flooziemode" and apparently it's working. They all have an arsenal of skills, and apparently this is one of them. I am usually quick to hit the editorial button, but I like this here.
Dragonrider July 29th, 2018, 6:34 pm
went back to page 1 and started a reread had forgotten a few things. It's been long enough that it's almost like a new novella.
BTW this incentive, didn't see Abby as a sports coupe type, more open air using magic to keep her hair straight and weather off her.
Merceneiress July 30th, 2018, 1:35 am
@Dragonrider: thanks! Glad to hear you reread it (hope you still enjoyed it second time around). Abby loves old style cars as well as motorcycles (hint hint regarding next vote incentive)
Guesticus (Guest) January 16th, 2019, 10:12 pm
You changed the cover? Old comment implies a change to Mirby Primal, and wasn't there just three ladies originally? o_O
Merceneiress January 16th, 2019, 10:52 pm
@Guesticus: Ahh, you noticed! Had to change it to reflect future pages...
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