Chapter 14, page 25

April 5th, 2018, 11:00 pm

User Comments:

awhorl (Guest), April 5th, 2018, 11:24 pm     Reply


I really don't like his uh smile. Which means that you've done a great job--especially positioning them so that it looks like he's looking through the fourth wall directly at urp me.

Guesticus (Guest), April 6th, 2018, 1:32 am     Reply


Somehow, got a feeling that that is not Mirby's fault, because it looks like what ever is, it's happening behind them and Mirby is still fiddling with the Spice

Hmm, does Sar have a touch of the Mystical in her? Would she like to? If she asked Mirby nicely, when her fingers aren't busy...

Guesticus (Guest), April 6th, 2018, 1:34 am     Reply


@awhorl: he's too smug, about something, and for someone who has spied on Tirin and Mirby several times (with a different female 'apprentice' every time), that equals trouble

Dragonrider, April 7th, 2018, 4:52 pm     Reply


Guess the new question is when and where will they next appear? Lets hope against hope it isn't somewhere where they end up as "guests" of someone along the lines of Torquemada or worst Rasputin or Stalin.

Ganurath (Guest), April 9th, 2018, 2:44 am     Reply


Anyone else find apprentice girl's dialogue kind of foreshadowy of the possibility of her phasing in and getting stranded in the past?

Dragonrider, April 9th, 2018, 1:31 pm     Reply


@Ganurath:possibly trying to rescue our erstwhile heroines from a fate worse than death. Then facing Tirins frustration as she realizes she obliterated the Slorn, to have them replaced by someone probably worse.

Guesticus (Guest), April 10th, 2018, 5:50 am     Reply


@Dragonrider: at least this time, they get a new cute (don't get jealous Mirby) sidekick from the start :D

Dragonrider, April 10th, 2018, 3:01 pm     Reply


@Guesticus:If, in their frustration and rage, Tirin and Mirby don't beat her to death.

Guesticus (Guest), April 10th, 2018, 10:21 pm     Reply


@Dragonrider: nah, Tirin isn't like that, Mirby on the other 'magic fingers'... :P

Merceneiress, April 11th, 2018, 5:24 pm     Reply


@awhorl: Thanks awhorl! Glad you liked or were creeped out by that smile! That smile is a window into that guy's soul...

@Ganurath: more to come on that!

@Dragonrider: you got it --- we'll see what her intentions are soon enough

@Guesticus: Yeah, not so much Tirin, but could definitely see Abby --- maybe not beating one to death, but magicking (is that a word?) one to death

Guesticus (Guest), April 12th, 2018, 6:16 am     Reply


@Merceneiress: he kinda reminds me of the little guy from "American Pickers", don't like him because he acts all nice and sweet, butt will offer $5 for something he knows he could sell for $500+

Hmm, was thinking something like a magickal Wedgie of Extreme Discomfort :P

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