Chapter 14, page 9

December 15th, 2017, 1:06 am

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Ganurath (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 3:14 am
Perhaps a mural would've been more her speed. Or a fresco! She seems like a fresco sort of woman.
Merceneiress December 18th, 2017, 1:07 am
@Ganurath: Agree, she's a mural or fresco kind of gal.
ems (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 4:26 am
scifi logic dictates the first thing to do when in a hostile environment is to take off your protective helmet and if you are female take this rule to the limits.
Guesticus (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 6:13 am
@ems: they are not in a hostile environment, unless you count the lack of technology, which is why they have to take their suits off, Dabs is still wearing the same outfit she had when she was a prisoner
Guesticus (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 6:15 am
Relatively speaking, Dabs is holding up quite well, for being in such a situation

Don't worry Dabs, as long as you continue to walk towards the portal, you should be headed in the correct direction

Ooo, was wondering who 'Carl' was, nice callback to the 'original' timeline :D
E Hines (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 6:35 am
I'll be glad to show you what a screensaver is, Sweetheart.
Eric Hines
E Hines (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 6:37 am
I hope they're caching that equipment rather than just tossing it. It might come in handy later on.
Eric Hines
Guesticus (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 10:16 am
@E Hines: look at panel four, Mirby's helmet is on the 'ground', so possibly safe to leave their gear there
E Hines (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 11:07 am
@Guesticus: Sure, but that's not much of a cache. There's no guarantee the stuff will be there if left unprotected/concealed. There are lots of ways to generate such paths; gates are only one.
Guesticus (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 12:42 pm
@E Hines: depends on where exactly there is
Where they came from should be fairly secure, depending on how long the effects of the nanos last, but the Guardians are toast completely, and it seems like Etrussedupturkey is the only one through the other gate

And of course we have Mirby and her mirror, it's possible she could bring that back and stuff their gear in there
Quarktime (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 10:34 am
What's a screen saver, Dabney?
Well, dear, you are a screen saver...now.
*EVIL GRIN*
Guesticus (Guest) December 15th, 2017, 12:50 pm
One other thing keep forgetting to mention: you have done a great job with Dabs' expressions on this page
Mysto (Guest) December 16th, 2017, 9:31 am
Aw, I just realized with the helmets off that Abby cut her hair. I don't think short hair suits her quite as much as it does Tirin.
Guesticus (Guest) December 16th, 2017, 11:29 am
@Mysto: we have seen a preview of her short her below the Vote (you have been voting every day, haven't you? o_O), butt, the new look Mirby with the attitude is going to take a little getting use to (the expression on the Gumroad Christmas-wrapped Mirby is a little... off putting, it's just something not used to from Mirror, and certainly not from Abby)

You can still see the original Abby and Mirror in the banner heading, scrolling down to the Gumroad ad after seeing them up top is... odd
Mysto (Guest) December 16th, 2017, 3:48 pm
@Guesticus: Yeh I figured that was her in the other picture. I think I like her long hair better.
Guesticus (Guest) December 16th, 2017, 11:19 pm
@Mysto: short hair is okay, it's that expression that is putting me off: there isn't anything wrong with it, just seems out of character for both Abby and Mirror
It's kinda like the difference between Anne Hathaway in "Princess Diaries" and in "Les Miserables"
Merceneiress December 17th, 2017, 9:18 am
@Guesticus: Interesting comments and comparison regarding Gumroad Abby's expression. The context of that preview is a scene with Santa --- if you were able to see the whole scene it probably explains it better (I think). Thanks for your comment about Dabney's expressions, too. She's got such a malleable face!
E Hines (Guest) December 17th, 2017, 8:33 am
As a practical matter, long hair wouldn't work well inside a helmet. No way to brush it out of your eyes when it moves in front of your face.
Too, the woman makes the hair, not the other way around.
Eric Hines
Merceneiress December 17th, 2017, 9:07 am
@Mysto, Guesticus and E Hines: Abby cut her hair short more for practical purposes --- she's getting serious now --- taking on the Slorn and then eventually Mistress. If she survives...there is a good chance she'll let her hair down once more (IF she survives).
Guesticus (Guest) December 18th, 2017, 6:59 am
@Merceneiress: yeah, can see Mirby being all serious on this page

An alternative to cutting hair short for helmet-wearing, is to slick it back and tie it up (or down, depending on how much 'room' there is in the helmet)

Yeah, the Gumroad Mirby is more predatory, which, like said, is kinda out of character for what we have seen of either Abby or Mirror (well, maybe a little for Mirror when she was looing at Billy :P), and it's not bad (per se), just... unexpected
Guesticus (Guest) December 18th, 2017, 7:05 am
Speaking of Gumroad, how long is that available for? Can't afford to Patreon, but one-off purchases are doable occasionally
We have seen the pink girl before, haven't we? And it's great we get both versions of Adult Tirin :D
Merceneiress December 18th, 2017, 9:15 am
@Guesticus: Indefinitely for now --- was just going to leave it up there for anyone interested and perhaps post newer "exclusive" incentives there in future.
Guesticus (Guest) December 19th, 2017, 12:18 am
@Merceneiress: great to read :)
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