Chapter 14, page 5

November 16th, 2017, 10:00 pm

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Guesticus (Guest) November 16th, 2017, 11:02 pm
What tipped Beau-diddly off? o_O
Hope Dabney not dead :(

The invotive of Mirby is seriously hot, but her right breast is defying gravity
Ganurath (Guest) November 16th, 2017, 11:19 pm
@Guesticus: I imagine Beau got tipped off by the punch knocking Dabney out. As had been pointed out earlier within the story, the pair has an "interesting" relationship.
Merceneiress November 17th, 2017, 12:55 am
@Guesticus: Haha -- regarding Abby's gravity defying scene -- let's say that in the future, one of the most popular cybernetic enhancements is the one that prevents unwanted sagging in various parts of the body for both men and women...

@Ganurath: Yup --- that's what I wanted to convey without going off on too much of a tangent regarding their relationship --- actually, the panels from page 4 were from a few scenes that I had done for Patreon patrons, elaborating on their relationship.
Merceneiress November 18th, 2017, 5:26 pm
@Guesticus: P.S. I redid the vote incentive, taking into account gravity (and no cyberenhancement)
Guesticus (Guest) November 19th, 2017, 5:02 am
@Merceneiress: hate critiquing, but the revised looks better (most others probably won't notice the difference, but have both versions now :D )
ems (Guest) November 17th, 2017, 3:30 am
I was skeptical right from the start that we have Mirby in this scene, because it denies her the stunning entry on the stage that she deserves. Now it's fighting time again! And the green exoskeleton can probably take much more than one hit. I expect some serious kung fu coming up.
Guesticus (Guest) November 17th, 2017, 6:12 am
Oh right, Diddly would have hit her 'girlfriend' as a test because she (and Tirin) thought it was Abby, and, if it turned out to really be Chrissy, she would have been able to shrug it off and smack her back
rob (Guest) November 23rd, 2017, 9:21 am
Happy Thanksgiving.
Merceneiress November 23rd, 2017, 2:24 pm
@rob: Thanks! Hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving too!
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