Chapter 14, page 3

November 2nd, 2017, 10:00 pm

User Comments:

ems (Guest), November 3rd, 2017, 5:38 am     Reply


My imagination is totally insufficient to imagine the contents of a spice room. And I wonder: if all of the slorn's time enforcers have this suit that provides perfect protection against nanobots, why was Beau the only one smart enough to use it for the great jailbreak?

Guesticus (Guest), November 3rd, 2017, 5:50 am     Reply


@ems: Beau-diddly was in on the plan, that's why she was 'smart enough' to use it

One flaw in her treacherous plan: she knows Abby, but does she know about Abbor? (that's 'Abby + Mirror', felt it sounded slightly better than 'MirAbby', maybe 'MirBy'? still working on it...)

Wait, who told MirBy that she wouldn't be needing the fancy hi-tech gun? The gun Tirin was relying on...

Guesticus (Guest), November 3rd, 2017, 6:01 am     Reply


Wendy's dance dress would make a perfect swimming slash sunbathing suit

Merceneiress, November 3rd, 2017, 7:17 pm     Reply


@ems: Regarding why the other time enforcers and Slorn were not in full blown suits like Beau --- you're assuming Beau is in league with the Slorn or the other enforcers. She's not. But why the hell is she going against the plan then? Well, that answer is coming up.

@Guesticus: True -- Beau is not aware of Abby's merger. Good question regarding the gun...

Guesticus (Guest), November 4th, 2017, 9:33 am     Reply


@Merceneiress: ooo, a 'mysterious' third party as entered the arena!
Please, it's not that whacker from the first arc who killed Tirin's dad, is it?

Dean (Guest), November 5th, 2017, 7:37 pm     Reply


Abby would look pretty silly right now if she'd already taken that armour off.

Guesticus (Guest), November 6th, 2017, 12:19 am     Reply


@Dean: There's... a reason why she's wearing the armour, with the visor down

E Hines (Guest), November 6th, 2017, 6:21 am     Reply


@Dean: No, I think Abby would look quite...fetching...if she'd taken her armor off.
Eric Hines

Guesticus (Guest), November 6th, 2017, 8:15 am     Reply


@E Hines: we have already seen Mirby helmet-less, and Mirror armour-less, so we at least have a good idea what Mirby looks like over-all (but would still be nice to see her all-over ;) )

Mysto (Guest), November 7th, 2017, 9:36 am     Reply


Okay, here's a crazy way-out wild guess for you: Beau is going to try and get Tirin off the hook by completing the plan herself, making it look like she was the instigator all along, and it wasn't Tirin's fault.

Guesticus (Guest), November 7th, 2017, 10:00 am     Reply


@Mysto: why would she be needing to do that? If Tirin succeeded (and she will) then there would be no more Slorn fucking around with the time line and every one else, like self-appointed time-fuckers

Guest, November 7th, 2017, 3:09 pm     Reply


@Guesticus: I dunno, that's why it was a "crazy" guess. Maybe it's because she said she wants to leave Tirin and Abby "sitting it out" instead of something more like "the plan is over". That seems to indicate that the plan is still on, just without Tirin and Abby in it. I guess we shall see.

Guest, November 7th, 2017, 4:01 pm     Reply


@Mysto: meant the part of Beau-diddly taking the blame for what has happened, unless you meant she wanted the glory...
Fairly sure that she meant 'sitting it out' like Blue and his pal (unconscious or worse)

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