Chapter 14, Page 2

October 26th, 2017, 10:09 pm

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Jarin (Guest) October 26th, 2017, 11:27 pm
Priorities, Billy.
osty789 (Guest) October 27th, 2017, 12:56 am
Billy Billy, if you ever want a chance with Tirin, you're going to have to accept that no matter how smart you are, Tirin is always going to be smarter. The sooner the better.
Sable (Guest) October 27th, 2017, 1:54 am
Armor I really, really like her armor. To many female armor set are crap from a functional standpoint, but her's is not only functional, it looks amazing.
Guesticus (Guest) October 27th, 2017, 7:06 am
@Sable: technically, Lil Tir doesn't have the two points that are usually the 'problem' with adult female armour, well, not as prominent, but yes, whoever designed her armour did a fantabulicious job (okay, 'fantabulous' is a recognized word, now to work on 'fantabulicious' :D )

@osty789: you make it sound like Lil Tir being smarter would be a problem, because she's a girl and he's a guy
The bigger 'problem' would be, Lil Tir hasn't decided if she likes guys only (and Billy specifically) or if she also likes girls (like Tirin does)
Sable (Guest) October 27th, 2017, 7:24 am
Armor @Guesticus: Her armor would be fantabulous scaled for her other self. :)
Guesticus (Guest) October 28th, 2017, 4:59 am
@Sable: not sure if it would though, even if you 'adjusted' the chest plate to accommodate Tirin, this armour seems more suited for Lil Tir (personality wise as well as size) and Tirin would need something a little more... different (and not meaning just revealing)
Sable (Guest) October 28th, 2017, 9:35 am
Armor @Guesticus: Well, it's one of the few I've seen recently that "I" would wear. :)
Fafhred (Guest) October 30th, 2017, 4:21 pm
@Sable: That because those armors work on the 'tits for stats' principle...
Feanor (Guest) October 27th, 2017, 5:59 am
Towelette 1. Whew! L'il Tir finally got all that blood off her face!

2. Seriously with the hormones, Billy?
Merceneiress October 27th, 2017, 8:56 am
I absolutely agree that the armor was so well designed. I have to give credit to the artist who made it. An artist named "Kool" on Daz3d.com. It was perfect for lil' Tirin. There are other versions that would make it not very functional and also not appropriate for a little kid.
Brianna Ort (Guest) October 27th, 2017, 5:54 pm
@Merceneiress: Thank you for a wonderfully long page. I suppose it helped to have the panels similar, but it read like a book chapter.
Merceneiress October 29th, 2017, 11:52 pm
@Brianna Ort: Thank you! I was thinking of cutting the page in half, but thought better of it. Your compliment just affirmed my decision.

@Guesticus and @Sable: At the very least, it would make one helluva Halloween costume!

@Feanor: Yup, Abby cleaned her face with a magic cloth.

@Jarin and osty789: I think Billy can't help it --- his mind probably cycles at top speed. This coupled with an incessant need for satisfaction leads to such questions. As with any kid/teen, he needs to learn restraint --- I think girls mature faster than boys in this respect.
Guesticus (Guest) October 30th, 2017, 12:39 am
Glad you didn't cut it in half as well, cramming everything into less panels would just seem... messy, and we wouldn't get to see Lil Tir's slowly growing irritation at her meditation interruptions :D

Now we just need to get someone to make a real-life copy of Lil Tir's armour, plenty of talented cosplayers out there who make their own costumes, just need to find one and show them this outfit (Wendy's swimsuit as well :D)
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