Chapter 13, page 33

September 28th, 2017, 10:00 pm

User Comments:

Lurker314 (Guest), September 29th, 2017, 4:20 am     Reply


Player five has entered the ring!

Guesticus (Guest), September 29th, 2017, 5:28 am     Reply


So that's what Beau has been up to (BOO! we can't see her inside that tincan :( )

If Blue is as strong as he pretends to be, that's a great position to snap her skinny arm (or rip it completely off): he straightens out and her arm is at best dislocated if not removed from the shoulder joint

E Hines (Guest), September 29th, 2017, 7:37 am     Reply


An arm under her right leg at the knee and stand up; a finger jab into her eyes, which might not strike but will draw an automatic flinch and distraction; a fist into those wonderful teeth; a heel-of-the-hand upward thrust for her nose; wrap his right leg around her body and roll to his right....
Lots of things an unarmed fighter can do in such a circumstance.
Eric Hines

Guesticus (Guest), September 29th, 2017, 12:38 pm     Reply


Wondering what the nanovapor is designed to do: not all are like cybertits and would probably like to return to their real life, or at least be out of Slorn control

D.D.D. Destroyer (Guest), September 29th, 2017, 8:41 pm     Reply


It might be the lighting, but is the metal lady....degenerating? Her skin color seems off compared to previous pages.

Guesticus (Guest), September 30th, 2017, 3:00 am     Reply


@D.D.D. Destroyer: fairly sure it is the lighting, look at the rest of that panel

Merceneiress, September 30th, 2017, 9:52 am     Reply


@D.D.D. Destroyer and @Guesticus: Yeah, it's the lighting and the rendering time was significantly increased with the addition of Beau, but I kind of liked that effect, especially as the nanovapor is being distributed and will be soon taking effect!

@E Hines: You sure know your moves (do you partake in any MMA)?

@Lurker314: is that a reference to Ready Player One? I just read that book - great stuff, can't wait to see the movie.

Guesticus (Guest), October 1st, 2017, 6:47 am     Reply


Only 'problem' with the bathing suit: how does she swim in those heels? o_O

E HInes (Guest), October 1st, 2017, 8:08 am     Reply


@Guesticus: No MMA, never interested. Just some Krav Maga training. Our instructor taught us some Haganah, too.
Eric Hines

Merceneiress, October 1st, 2017, 11:39 am     Reply


@Guesticus: They have little jet boosters in the heals to propel her in the water?

@E Hines: Ah. Krav Maga and Haganah - that's badass!

Guesticus (Guest), October 1st, 2017, 1:42 pm     Reply


@Merceneiress: kinda like those hose-jetpacks you sometimes see? o_O

Dean (Guest), October 1st, 2017, 8:37 pm     Reply


So I'm guessing the seated lotus is some kind of sex position?

Merceneiress, October 1st, 2017, 11:55 pm     Reply


@Dean: Yup

Ebonbolt, October 2nd, 2017, 10:29 am     Reply


@Guesticus: But it's not a "swimsuit," it's a "bathing suit." It's probably meant for "sun-bathing" in the attention.

Guesticus (Guest), October 5th, 2017, 6:36 am     Reply


@Ebonbolt: that's actually worse, she's going to end up with some weird tan-lines!!

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