Chapter 13, page 23

July 20th, 2017, 11:00 pm

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Ganurath (Guest) July 20th, 2017, 11:49 pm
HA! I totally called it! It was faux dad's outfit that did her in.

Also, that pun was deliberate on my part.
Guesticus (Guest) July 21st, 2017, 6:49 am
No, hate to say it, but this is cheating! Doppel won fair and square, she deserves to be freed, not killed!!
bmgrossn (Guest) July 21st, 2017, 7:25 am
Fair is Fair If the Doppel can use mind games on Tirin, why can't she use mind games on it. Falsely claiming that the Doppel's mind game had some affect on her (Tirin) seems perfectly fair to me.
agedsage (Guest) July 21st, 2017, 8:47 am
@bmgrossn: I totally agree,she (Tirin)played her like she was playing Tirin.
Guesticus (Guest) July 21st, 2017, 11:06 am
Using Mirby is what was cheating
Also remember: Doppel is just as much a prisoner as Mirror was, possibly more so
Speedy (Guest) May 22nd, 2019, 3:07 am
@Guesticus: The rules didn't say anything about not gaining allies during the test. Salock even did her best to encourage Mirror to help Tirin. The fact that multiple people were moved to help Lil Tirin says volumes more about her worth than her fighting skills do.
rob (Guest) July 21st, 2017, 1:56 pm
umm Doppler you are TOAST.!! you tried to kill Billy.!!
Guesticus (Guest) July 21st, 2017, 11:33 pm
@rob: Billy wasn't supposed to have been there in the first place, it's supposed to be a solo test, which, by the Rights of the Vay, Lil Tir has forfeited (ie cheated) and she loses everything, if she is lucky she will simply have to retake the test, with Billy chained to Felina, and gagged and bound, probably even sedated

@Zimriel: welcome, hope you enjoyed the story so far :)
Speedy (Guest) May 22nd, 2019, 3:26 am
@Guesticus: They tried to give Tirin the easiest possible tests. In their eyes, a worthless boy screwed things up, since Billy caused Mirror to choose the hardest possible test.

Now that Tirin has not only completed (almost) the hardest tests, but also managed to keep the worthless boy alive, she will be a true legend, to the Vay.

Most Vay women would've used Billy as bait for the creatures. (Possibly one limb at a time)

When word that Tirin and Billy worked together as a team gets out, it'll be a milestone on the road to Vay gender equality.
Zimriel (Guest) July 21st, 2017, 10:29 pm
Boo ya! I caught up to the story!
Mysto (Guest) July 23rd, 2017, 4:31 pm
I have a feeling the question of whether young Tirin cheated or not is going to be the LEAST of the complications arising from this.
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