Chapter 13, page 20

June 30th, 2017, 2:00 am

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ems (Guest) June 30th, 2017, 2:55 am
Why do I get the feeling that big Tirin is just another ruse of the final stage boss? Perhaps because she seems a little out of character here?

At least Abby's oompa loompa skin color issues have been sorted out, though I highly doubt she will like it.
Guesticus (Guest) June 30th, 2017, 5:40 am
@ems: yeah, suggested it being a trick of the Final Boss last page, and the problem is, we know that that is not Tirin because we know what the grown up version looks like, but only Abby knows that the hair is wrong (and the face and bewbs)

Mirby is still blue, and her features are more 'normal' (that was the other thing that kinda stood out for me about Mirror, but difficult to explain)
Was really hoping they would have remained distinct, unless there is still two of them but now more closely resemble each other
Merceneiress June 30th, 2017, 11:02 am
@ems: Yes, gone is the oompa loompa look, in with the Violet Beuregarde scheme.

@Guesticus: Excellent points except I did use the same model for Tirin in this render (I think the suit accentuates certain body parts). Mirbby is a great name...

@D.D.D. Destroyer: Very observant (glad you caught that). Where is that body...

@Eboneye: Excellent point and conclusion.
Guesticus (Guest) June 30th, 2017, 7:11 pm
@Merceneiress: was actually comparing it to the ad image on the right (and being more than a little cheeky ;) ), but the mouth in panel four seemed a little 'off', and just passed it off as Chameleon using the image from Lil Tir (or extrapolating how she would look older) and not getting it quite correct
Also: yay! for original Model Tirin!! :D (or at least, her hair :P )
D.D.D. Destroyer (Guest) June 30th, 2017, 9:41 am
I don't see the body, I feel like it should be visible.
Eboneye (Guest) June 30th, 2017, 9:51 am
Chronal Crunch I don't know for sure in Mr. Cheng's milieu, but -usually- two chronally separate instances of the same person are bad in paradoxically cataclysmic ways. Even being in close proximity could have consequences... time being the thorny can of worms that it is... So chances are big tirin isn't...
rob (Guest) June 30th, 2017, 1:11 pm
also,, big Tirin, wheres your gun..???
an big tirin would not have shot,, cut / stab yes,, bullet would be in path of kids...
... umm ..?? kant those two ( tirin x2) read each other?? at that range talking would be moot ...
Feanor (Guest) July 1st, 2017, 5:47 pm
D'ain't no way/no how that's akshully Tirin senior.
She looks different to us because Lil Tir only has fragmented memory of her.

The Real thread is with Abbey/Mirror, whom the hot little witch can't influence because of the mirror's Barrier. Now they're blended; stuck in the Between Place.

Plus, in a story arc like this one, it wood bee marginally goofy to introduce a character who winds up dead in three frames ...

Now we're getting somewhere, Steve.
Keep up the great work!

Neil
rob (Guest) July 4th, 2017, 9:00 am
happy forth
Merceneiress July 4th, 2017, 3:10 pm
@rob: Yes, Happy Fourth!

@Feanor: Thanks, Feanor! Good points (spot on)!

@Guesticus: I am glad that effect came across (the slight differences in Tirin). Yay!

@rob: Older Tirin can see little Tirin's memories as they form, but not vice versa. Indeed...where is the gun?
Guesticus (Guest) July 5th, 2017, 5:05 am
That 'outfit' Tirin is wearing? Seriously looks wrong, specially the crotch part in panel five (not meaning there is a fault in the model, just the design)
Speedy (Guest) May 22nd, 2019, 1:48 am
@Guesticus: What? You have a problem with her chasity laser?

I think the suit looks torqued in panel 5 because her right hip is elevated. Clothes tend to distort wrong on 3D models, because of the way they attach to the body. Tight clothing acts like it's glued or painted on the body, and doesn't stretch and move around in a natural way.
agedsage (Guest) July 8th, 2017, 7:27 pm
Oh...come-on Tirin, think....What did your future self tell you about what would happen IF you both share the same time-line?
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