Chapter 13, page 11

April 28th, 2017, 2:00 am

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Lloyd (Guest) April 28th, 2017, 7:34 am
The fuzzy slippers are a nice touch. Note - footwear like that is super easy to use as a weapon. "Stop! Or I'll shoe!"
Merceneiress April 28th, 2017, 9:10 am
@Lloyd: Laughed - Lethal fuzzy slippers.

@Guesticus: Whatever makes you comfortable when you sleep, eh? Chrissy happens to like that sequin-bikini-sensation when she sleeps.
Guesticus (Guest) April 28th, 2017, 2:36 pm
@Merceneiress: was thinking more of the rings than the material
Butt (such a delightful today ;) ), as you said, 'whatever makes you comfortable'

Can understand the reason why Beau insulted Tirin, but personally, it seemed a little 'forced' (viewing this from an observers point of view, not as a reader): Tirin came to let Beau know how well she did, and reassure her on her progress after she seemed 'down' after another loss, and Beau just straight out insulted her and provoked a fight here and now (which could have backfired by bringing in the Enforcers)
Merceneiress May 1st, 2017, 1:04 am
@Guesticus: I can see your reasoning. But Chrissy's annoyed "not again" statement suggests that these two have been going at it many times in the past. To Chrissy and the Slorn this is just another eyes-roll-up moment --- again?! Weird humans!

@knowmad1976: Haha, just watched a youtube video called the secret of La Chankla --- hilarious! Never knew the potential power of the slipper or flip-flop!
Guesticus (Guest) May 1st, 2017, 1:02 pm
@Merceneiress: Was Chrissy referring to them fighting? Or making-out in the Klingon way?
So, Beau and Tirin have been hiding their little 'make-out sessions' behind staged fights?
Merceneiress May 2nd, 2017, 11:49 pm
@Guesticus: Chrissy was referring to them fighting --- not as violent as a Klingon mating ritual.
knowmad1976 (Guest) April 28th, 2017, 6:39 pm
Triggered! @Lloyd: You have never witnessed the poo inspiring power of La Chankla, have you? It is nothing to joke about, my friend. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go have flashbacks while curled up in this corner.
Guesticus (Guest) April 28th, 2017, 8:44 am
Wait wait wait! WHAT!! Abby is the BAIT???
That... does not sound good :(

And what? Chrissy sleeps in her swim bikini? o_O
Speedy (Guest) May 21st, 2019, 5:17 pm
What if this Tirin isn't the first Tirin that the Slorn have sent back in time?

I always figured that another Flin time traveled before Tirin, causing the untucked shirt anomaly. But what if it was another Tirin?

Maybe it was actually Tirin Zero that caused the deaths of all but one Slorn.

Maybe these Slorn are expecting this Tirin to rebel.
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