Chapter 13, page 5

March 17th, 2017, 2:01 am

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Lurker (Guest) March 17th, 2017, 2:31 am
Bold... That's extraordinarily risky to be talking like that in front of someone. I really don't get her doing that.
Merceneiress March 17th, 2017, 9:23 am
@Lurker: I can see why you think that, but all the slorn clerk knows is that Tirin is just being her usual self, a star time enforcer who is all business, trying to get the exact location of the anomaly (no mention that she's trying to track down her younger self). The Slorn do not have reason to suspect anything devious (yet).
Lurker (Guest) March 17th, 2017, 5:50 pm
@Merceneiress: This is just opsec to me. (Even if it was the AF.) You never discuss an operation around people not involved with the operation. After the action, you might talk about it around other service members. Might.
Merceneiress March 17th, 2017, 9:19 pm
@Lurker and @Guesticus: Points well taken. Let's just say bold is the right word -- perhaps even cavalier. Why? We'll find out soon enough!
Guesticus (Guest) March 17th, 2017, 11:29 am
Can actually see Lurker's point: talking like this in front of Slorn is going to start making them suspicious, and we already know that they are, even if they aren't sure why they should be
They will be thinking "You know there is an anomaly, and what level of a threat it is, but you don't know where they are? Just who is this 'anomoly' and why haven't we been properly informed of this?"
Continuity (Guest) March 17th, 2017, 6:14 pm
Business Attire I like what Abby's hairstyle changed to, getting suited to go on this mission.
Merceneiress March 17th, 2017, 9:20 pm
@Continuity: Glad you like her hairstyle --- I had to change it to fit the helmet that she will need to wear with her suit.
Guesticus (Guest) March 18th, 2017, 12:11 am
@Merceneiress: hmm, Tirin is setting a trap? but using Lil Tir and Abby as bait? o_O
Will wait and see what you have planned :D

Yes, her hair up looks good :D
But it doesn't look as good as it does spread on a pillow though :P
E Hines (Guest) March 19th, 2017, 3:54 pm
Tirin is engaging in good OPSEC and COMSEC. Never break pattern right before an op, never go radio silent at that time unless you're routinely radio silent.

If it's her habit to to prattle on about inconsequentials that sound good in front of underlings (especially if they only look like underlings), then she should continue that for this op.

Eric Hines
Merceneiress March 20th, 2017, 9:05 am
@E Hines: Well said! Exactly!

@Guesticus: Tirin is definitely planning something --- just wish I could get there right away and show you --- but will hold my tongue (or text)
Guesticus (Guest) March 21st, 2017, 6:23 am
@Merceneiress: have no problem waiting :D

@E Hines: yes, good point, but... does Tirin often get missions on her own without the Slorn knowing anything about it? o_O
Merceneiress March 21st, 2017, 9:00 am
@Guesticus: chap 11, page 45 - the missions are all available on the board. For all the Slorn underling knows, she is tracking one of the missions from the board. The slorn who are responsible for keeping track of anomalies and whether they are taken care of will be tracking progress of the enforcers and logging it in when the anomaly is eliminated. this is where it will become tricky --- when and if they detect Abby is not in the place she is supposed to be...
Guesticus (Guest) March 21st, 2017, 6:21 pm
@Merceneiress: oh, so this is a case of using bluff between two different departments: "Sure, go ahead, call them up at this time of night and ask them if there really is an anomaly, I can wait."

@Guest: Billy doesn't have to be a great actor, he just needs to be the bait long enough for Lil Tir to get into position to strike
Most vore-works tend to use females getting eated, with their clothes slowly being dissolved (if they were wearing clothes in the first place) :P
Guest March 21st, 2017, 9:12 am
Good thing they are doing something, because with the boy's (lack of) acting skills, I was looking at a vore episode coming soon xD
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