Chapter 12, page 31

December 9th, 2016, 2:01 am

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Guesticus (Guest) December 9th, 2016, 4:14 am
Wow! Sally really was a bitch (hot, but a bitch)!
Did she think by killing the boy (after Mirror agreed to not see again) would make her harder? A hardened bitch like Sally? Guess Sally didn't like it when Mirror got pissed instead

Umm, just why won't Mirror show herself to Lil Tir? o_O
Oh, and if she is simply shy, she doesn't have to show herself, just make it so Lil Tir can hear her

Uh-oh gang, Véagol is about to get back up! So either finish her, finish the story, or get the Hael out of there!!
Kheda (Guest) December 9th, 2016, 4:23 am
Heh, Little Tir will probably sense the motion behind and casually stab backwards with the knife, so ending this existence of Véagol
Guesticus (Guest) December 9th, 2016, 7:00 am
@Kheda: Except, as Mirror said, Sally will simply bring her back for the next test
tob (Guest) December 9th, 2016, 9:01 am
THAT is not a quite sound.!! they heard that.!
and why would Mirror show herself? she dont like females..
Guesticus (Guest) December 9th, 2016, 8:54 pm
@tob: Like said, she doesn't have to reveal herself, just let Lil Tir hear her
DLKmusic (Guest) December 10th, 2016, 9:12 pm
@Guesticus: There's also the possibility (which at this point is only my wild-assed theory) that Billy is magically gifted, and Tirin isn't, so she wouldn't be able to see or hear the mirror anyway.
Guesticus (Guest) December 11th, 2016, 9:39 am
@DLKmusic: That... is possible, could explain better why he was able to read and understand that Vay-text
Dragonrider December 11th, 2016, 11:20 am
Couple talking points here, Mirror~Mirror is enamored with Billy and jealous of Tirin and the relationship she has with Billy. Also she knows Tirin can and will have Billy's kids another point on the jealousy scale. With those as a given such she will protect Billy and let Tirin deal with Véagol on her own just to see if she is worthy of Billy.
Guesticus (Guest) December 12th, 2016, 6:06 am
@Dragonrider: Wait, what? Mirror can see the future? o_O
Dragonrider December 12th, 2016, 9:13 am
@Guesticus: She knows if they do the horizontal tango on a regular basis something happens. Because Tirin is not gonna live with conventional rules.
Guesticus (Guest) December 13th, 2016, 7:12 am
@Dragonrider: How do you know they are even going to do the horizontal tango? o_O
DLKmusic (Guest) December 15th, 2016, 1:11 pm
@Guesticus: She doesn't have to see the future to add 2+2 about Billy and Tirin, Guesticus. Although this particular story should be an important history lesson for both Tirin and Billy.
Dragonrider December 13th, 2016, 10:05 am
Billy has been looking at Tirins ass since this started,she is female, bisexual(per inferences from the life of Tirin Prime) enjoying men as much as women. She's fighting to own him lock stock and jock-strap,nature will take its course.
Merceneiress December 14th, 2016, 8:19 pm
Only comment I have is --- I love it! Love reading all of your comments! Dragonrider, you have quite a way with words!!!!
Ebonbolt December 15th, 2016, 5:45 pm
Poor Billy, surrounded by domineering females: one trying to gain his eternal servitude, one wanting his help to escape a mirror, one trying to kill him & drink his blood, one in his head...
Yeah, don't forget the elf wench in his head.
@DLKmusic & @Guesticus: Elf Wench is also a point in favor of "magical ability" here, btw.
Guest December 16th, 2016, 8:07 am
@Ebonbolt: Isn't Elf Wench just a nanite hallucination? o_O

@Merceneiress: it's great to have such a wonderful story to make comments about, and even greater to have an author who doesn't get hung up on their creation and actually allows the comments :D
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