Chapter 12, page 9

July 8th, 2016, 7:44 am

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unicornfrog July 8th, 2016, 3:31 pm
This story is really brilliant, I love connected timelines. I am so glad you're still going strong. Friday is my highlight! :) I know I praise constantly, but I really am happy to see your new updates. I look forward to it every time.
Merceneiress July 9th, 2016, 9:35 pm
@unicornfrog: Thank you so much --- please don't apologize --- I do not mind constant praise at all ;) I am hoping the story continues to keep you and everyone else engaged (even at such a slow pace of once a week...)

@Peter: She needs to meditate or do yoga...

@Guesticus and @Dragonrider: Remember, Lil Tirin "downloaded" Big Tirin's journal with Billy's injectable nanotechs. The side effect of this injection was the Oscar hallucinations that manifest and actually help to access Big Tirin's data -- last chapter page 18 -

@Byron: Thanks for explaining. Haha! That's right backing up is extremely important (I've lost more than a page or two because I didn't remember to...)

@Jamie59: She sure is --- and she'll get even more revved up in the future...
Guesticus (Guest) July 10th, 2016, 10:41 am
@Merceneiress: oh, so it's not actually Oscar, it's just a way for Lil Tir to process the information?
Didn't you say that there should be a nude female hallucination showing up soon? Or did you mean Billy's 'Elf'?

@E Hines: which version? the comic book? the movie? the cartoon? or the crappy TV version?
Merceneiress July 10th, 2016, 1:36 pm
@Guesticus: Haha! Yes, that was Billy's elf (she had offered that to Billy, but he was more annoyed than enthusiastic).

@E Hines: I had to look that up --- I saw the scene in Arrow --- I get it now!
Peter (Guest) July 8th, 2016, 4:56 pm
Wow Felina, take some anger management classes, before you end up doing something really evil.
Guesticus (Guest) July 8th, 2016, 6:25 pm
@Peter: more like something truly stupid that her arrogance couldn't foresee and her (lack of) abilities can't get her out of the consequences
Guesticus (Guest) July 8th, 2016, 6:21 pm
Really hoping Tirin kicks Falina's arse so badly she is, well, better not say
Let's just say, have never liked that smug bitch and will be happy when she is ended, permanently
Jamie59 July 8th, 2016, 9:12 pm
Tirin's all revved up now.
Dragonrider July 9th, 2016, 2:06 am
UHHH where the hell did Oscar come from? Last we saw he was in a ship that was blown up by the Emperor's storm troopers. Suggest Miss Short Fuse take a chill pill. Mistress Salok would not be pleased to have her Granddaughter roughly treated by the hired help. Especially when said help needs a sword to defend their honor after a twelve year old girl handed her, her ass with one kick.
Byron (Guest) July 9th, 2016, 6:13 pm
@Dragonrider: Oscar came from the memory drive from big Tirin that Billy uploaded into little Tirin with the nano-meds. After that, Oscar just sort of appeared to little Tirin. You can go back to the beginning of the new Tirin story (after she saves her dad) to get that.
Guesticus (Guest) July 9th, 2016, 9:17 pm
@Byron: Dragonrider does have a point: how, or when, did Adult Tirin retrieve Oscar after her ship with him installed on it (and her new, female, 'friend') was blown up?
Byron (Guest) July 9th, 2016, 9:24 pm
Backup! @Guesticus: I'm an IT guy....Backup!
E Hines (Guest) July 10th, 2016, 6:41 am
Tirin, channeling Ra's al Ghul (and because she's older than she looks--nano injections can do that), to Felina:

I'll take your blades from you when you are through with them.

Eric Hines
Fafhred (Guest) July 11th, 2016, 5:32 am
I was just wondering: is she also getting the benefit of skills learned by her alternate timeline future self?
Merceneiress July 11th, 2016, 8:29 am
@Fafhred: She gets the knowledge/memories of her future self, but not actually the skills.
Guesticus (Guest) July 12th, 2016, 10:32 am
@Merceneiress: yup, she has the 'memory' and knowledge of the skills, but she hasn't yet had the time or chance to practice them (she was probably just as surprised as everyone else that that side kick actually worked)
Speedy (Guest) May 20th, 2019, 12:40 pm
@Guesticus: It worked because this kick was Little Tirin's skill. I think she was practicing it both times we first saw her.

Also, because she caught Felina totally offguard. Felina doesn't intend to let that happen again.
Speedy (Guest) May 20th, 2019, 1:05 pm
(Oscar! Put some pants on! It's creepy that fighting makes your wiener... pokey) xp

(Wait a second! You're not perving on my aunt, are you? Gross! That's just all kinds of wrong! If you don't cut that out, then I'mma halucinate a tiny chainsaw, and you'll have'ta start callin' yourself "Stumpy")

Samson: "Tirin? Uh... You remember that really awkward conversation we had about the birds and the bees? Do we need to have another talk on that subject? Or, maybe your Aunt Yritai would be a better person to talk with about such things."

Yritai: "Oh, yes, Samson! I'd love to talk with you about the birds and the bees!"

Felina, Tirin, & Billy: "Blargh!"

Tirin: "Get a room, you two! ... Did I just say-? ... Aaaargh! Old Tirin! Get out of my head!"
Merceneiress May 20th, 2019, 8:45 pm
@Speedy: Lol! I should hire you as a guest writer for Patreon stuff (if Patreon funds were more plentiful that is).

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