Chapter 12, page 2

May 20th, 2016, 8:16 am

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Guest (Guest) May 20th, 2016, 9:43 am
Typo I think that there is a typo in the last word bubble
Merceneiress May 20th, 2016, 8:14 pm
@Guest: Oops. Corrected. Thank you.

@Dragonrider: If only he could have gone back in time to do part C with his new knowledge...
E Hines (Guest) May 21st, 2016, 7:18 am
@Merceneiress: Be a tight time loop. Hardly noticeable....

Eric Hines
Dragonrider May 20th, 2016, 11:22 am
A. You're talking to the bastard that did this.
B. Your daughter will save you ass in the future when Flin comes to kill you.
C. In your grief why not do what you've wanted all along kill Flin and save the future a lot of problems?
StarSword (Guest) May 22nd, 2016, 12:56 pm
@Dragonrider: Pity the characters can't read the comment section. :P
Guesticus (Guest) May 22nd, 2016, 6:46 am
That's why you store a copy of your brainwaves somewhere safe (updated periodically, no point being restored with 10 years' out of date memories :P )
Karyl (Guest) May 23rd, 2016, 7:55 am
In like Flin, the blade comment goes--jeepers, no reason to wonder why we all hate him!
Speedy (Guest) May 20th, 2019, 6:41 am
Can we please kill Flin in every chapter?

We could all say, "OMG! They killed Kenny Flin!" every time. It would never get old.
Speedy (Guest) May 20th, 2019, 6:52 am
She reminds me of T'Pol. @Merceneiress, You need to stop watching Star Trek reruns, while you're creating characters. xD
Merceneiress May 20th, 2019, 8:43 am
@Speedy: Love Star Trek -- can't help it!
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