Chapter 12, Page 1

May 13th, 2016, 9:00 am

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Merceneiress May 13th, 2016, 9:02 am
New chapter and new incentive of Abby at the beach - thanks for voting everyone!
Dragonrider May 13th, 2016, 10:04 am
Looks like little Tirin is drawing on memories of Tirin Prime to get through her interview with the Queen. Who is much younger and appears more of a bitch than the one Prime met.

BTW any chance we could she her model that Bikini in a fishnet fabric.? And wonder what the Royal Court would thing about being vote incentives?
Merceneiress May 13th, 2016, 7:48 pm
@Dragonrider: Oh the Royal Court would be very displeased with being in a vote incentive, but in an alternate universe they'd love it (so will work on this for a future incentive).
Dragonrider May 14th, 2016, 10:39 am
@Merceneiress: Hee-Hee-Hee anything to piss off Queen Nose-Up-My-Ass Bitch The First.
Jamie59 May 13th, 2016, 7:28 pm
Tirin looks to know the protocols.
Peter (Guest) May 14th, 2016, 8:18 pm
Yeah, I wish Abby could go to the beach, too ;)
Guesticus (Guest) May 15th, 2016, 1:31 am
Interesting splayed hand-clasp, that's something she has to have gotten from Adult!Tirin

Brunette Guard seems to be sizing up Lil Tirin, almost has that Spock Eyebrow thing going on

Abby's not on a beach, she's in a desert (there are no sand dunes or anything, just a flat expanse all the way to the mountains)
Merceneiress May 15th, 2016, 12:39 pm
@Guesticus: actually she is on a beach -- those are waves in the background. I should have put her closer to them so you could see them better. Yes that guard does have a Spock-like look to her hunh?
Guesticus (Guest) May 15th, 2016, 3:40 pm
@Merceneiress: oh, can see that now
Had believed the froth on the waves to be clouds with the darker bit between the sand and the froth to be mountains, or snow-capped mountains stretching from side to side (New Zealand's other name translates into "The Land of the Long White Cloud" because of the Southern Alps)
Speedy (Guest) May 20th, 2019, 6:11 am
@Merceneiress: She looks Romulan, to me. Like a certain TNG security officer, who I won't name, because complicated spoilers.
Peter (Guest) May 15th, 2016, 7:20 pm
Hmm... beach volleyball? Abby and Wendy vs Felina and Yritai. Or something. Just a thought that suddenly came to mind. A very pleasant thought though :)
Guesticus (Guest) May 16th, 2016, 6:46 am
@Peter: can they use a Slorn for the ball?
Merceneiress May 16th, 2016, 8:29 am
@Guesticus: I can see that (the snow-capped mountains, Long White Cloud), that must be a beautiful sight.

@Peter: Nice suggestion for a future incentive!
Peter (Guest) May 17th, 2016, 10:24 pm
@Guesticus: I would be ok with that :)
Speedy (Guest) May 20th, 2019, 6:31 am
The queen reminds me a bit of Amy Pond. (When she had forgotten about Rory)

I bet Rose (young Tirin) could get her to say, "We are not amused." xD
Merceneiress May 20th, 2019, 8:42 am
@Speedy: Yes, she'd be great as the Queen!

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