Chapter 11, Page 22

November 21st, 2015, 10:11 am

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Guesticus (Guest) November 21st, 2015, 1:13 pm
Miss Rorry seems nice
Merceneiress November 23rd, 2015, 7:44 pm
@Guesticus: She is isn't she.

@Jamie59: Indeed - more of a shoulder devil than angel.

@Dragonrider: It's a pivotal time for Billy (especially with puberty hitting).

@unicornfrog: Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Yes, the elf is perhaps an unconscious reflection of Billy's true feelings.

@ByronG: Yeah, just keep the pot roast warm, Mom, in case I'm running late.

@Karyl: Thank you so much! Glad you are enjoying it. So far I'm having a blast.
Jamie59 November 21st, 2015, 5:11 pm
Billy's elf is a little bloodthirsty there.
Dragonrider November 21st, 2015, 5:26 pm
Tirin consult your "other self" you NEVER pass the opportunity for food or sleep, you don't know when it will happen again.

Side note looks like Billy wants to play hero for Tirin. Might it be Billy is not quite as nice and innocent as her other self remembers?
unicornfrog November 21st, 2015, 7:41 pm
Oh goodie!! ;)

I think Billy is actually a badass at heart. And if the elf knows everything Billy does, that means she knows we are in for a good time!
I'm getting a larger "heart bubble" for this story every chapter ^___^
ByronG (Guest) November 23rd, 2015, 7:50 am
Maybe a lot later Well Mom, depending on the trouble we get into, we may be home A LOT later!
Karyl (Guest) November 23rd, 2015, 8:39 am
You do such good work with characters and textures, and all the myriad details of scenes. Thank you so much for returning to this story!
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